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Xaria Khaleesi
Posts : 4240 Join date : 2009-11-15 Age : 23 Location : hell
| Subject: writing then and now Mon Jul 21, 2014 11:53 am | |
| this is where you can post how your writing was back when you first joined therpz to how it is now. the example(s) for now can be from another site yeah. Then: (Such dark times) - Spoiler:
I was waking up, and was walking to the bathroom brushing my hair, teeth, and adding a white feather head into her long, brown hair saying "Wow, God thank Youtube."
Now: - Spoiler:
Ulysses laid on his bed staring at the ceiling. He felt livid from all the rumors the tabloids have been publishing and at life in general. A music box, which played a dreadful tune, was the only sound to be heard, but that's only if you don't count the loud grandfather clock going tick tock tick tock over in the hallway. Right now, Jupiter was out of the house doing promotion for his band's newest single "The Dope Show" with Ulysses having to pack for rehab. So many things were going on at once, and he didn't know how long it'd take him to be out of rehab since he'd hate to miss his own movie premiere since he already has to miss the panel at San Diego Comic Con, and it'll the first year he wouldn't be able to go there. He had always went there religiously every year since he was 14 since it was the couple times he could go out cosplaying and just be himself more since people always thought of Ulysses as one of those child actors that never had a breakdown although it'd been the opposite for quite a while. It really didn't help any that he had thoughts of self hate and that he hung out with the wrong people as a teen due to being quite rebellious because he couldn't take his families shit anymore. Ulysses had started to use drugs in a recreational way starting at the age of 15, he befriended older men with really fucked up paraphilias, he went to rehab, had a marriage that only lasted two years, and he just wished he had a time machine to go pack into the past and change things that he wished he never did such as cheating on Lucille with his ex Jupiter. It was the first time since his divorce from Tamayuki that he'd actually had feelings for a girl. People who were actually close to him knew that the fact that he was a bisexual man that preferred those of the same sex didn't help.
Getting off of his bed, Ulysses went downstairs and went into the kitchen to get himself a slice of cheesecake as a way to soothe the chronic pain of being such a fucked up asshole, well at least he thought he was one, despite the fact that those who usually meet him described him as a really kind person to know. Clearly, he didn't feel that way; it was almost as though he was apart of a real life angsty as fuck fanfiction. If he wasn't an actor, he'd probably get himself involved in strip clubs and the likes in order to financially support himself. Ulysses just knew that his parents regretted allowing him to become an actor, especially his father who is upset that he left the religion and ended up becoming a drug addict that can be too feminine for his own good. he was pretty much ready to go into hiding and take on a new name and stuff to get out of the spotlight to let the gossip die down, but of course it'd never work since he's been famous since the tender age of 7, and that was a pretty fucking long time. Ulysses wished that Hollywood was as glamorous as it appeared in the movies he watched as a kid because he pretty much loathed being a famous person now. If only..
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| | | Caseroos On a Roll
Posts : 631 Join date : 2010-12-12 Age : 25 Location : The Universe
| Subject: Re: writing then and now Wed Apr 27, 2016 10:49 pm | |
| TheRPZ randomly appeared in my Google search tonight and I took a trip down memory lane... seven years ago... It scares me...- then:
Chieko shook her head. "He is there. Just...." Chieko groaned her eyes went black. "CRAP NO!" She went blind. She couldn't see. "Run! Get out now!" She said as she was forced up.
(Damn I was dramatic AF)
- Now (Thank god):
(Enjoy my deep, Angsty AF Fanfic from my tumblr <3)
The light was really, really bright, but yet you couldn’t stop staring at it. I mean, it was really the only thing you could look at without getting upset. Hearing the heart monitor was bad enough, but having to look at it would have caused some serious outrage. Also, the bratty nurse wouldn’t leave you alone. She said someone had to be in there with you at all times, no exceptions. Which was crap honestly, if you were going to die, it didn’t matter if you had one, two, twenty, or no nurses in there. The doctors could only repair so much, and decided that you didn’t need any serious surgery just yet. The pain in your side was excruciating, no matter how much morphine they pumped you with. Three deep gashes, five broken ribs, cracked shoulder blade, a nasty concussion, broken femur, you name it. That demon did a number on you. All you tried to do was stop a young girl from making a horrible decision. Normally, you would have let things like this go, but your rage was too much, your anger towards the King of Hell just made you want to hurt him, but not directly. Hurting his “sales” wouldn’t maim him that much, but it sure would have made you feel a lot better. Karma’s a bitch. You tilted your head to the side towards the lamp in the corner of the room, watching the little glare in your vision as you went. As you watched the white spot, you noticed a familiar figure standing in the doorway of your hospital room. “Excuse me, who are you? No one else is allowed to be in here,” the nurse came to her feet. Crowley glared at her, his eyes flicking red, she gasped and sprinted out of the room as fast as she could. You rolled your eyes seeing the demon approach your bedside. Angry that he is once again trying to coming to your aid, when you didn’t need help at all. You were perfectly capable on your own. You felt his hand brush over your face ever so softly, twisting a lock of hair around his finger. “I’m sorry, (Y/n)… I’m so very sorry… I never meant for this. I never meant for any of this,” Crowley kept his hand against your cheek, but you stayed silent, not having the courage to speak to him. You could feel your heart begin to race, unsure if it was because of him, or because of the pain in your side becoming worse. He could feel your uneasiness, and slowly peeled back the sheets, revealing your blood soaked bandages. His gasp was audible, clearly painful. Crowley closed his eyes and slowly sunk down to his knees so his head was level with yours. You turned slowly, seeing something that you never thought you would see. The King of Hell was crying, because of you. A small whimper escaped your lips as you looked into his eyes. He looked back at you, wanting to say everything that was on his mind. Wanting to tell you how much he loved you, how much he cared about you, how much he couldn’t live without you. You didn’t need him to tell you that though, because you could see it in those eyes of his. Your heart was beating out of your chest, you could feel the sweat beading on your forehead, but you didn’t mind, you didn’t care. Every feeling of anger in your body faded away and you just felt… blissful almost. Crowley was by your side, and he was going to be no matter what. He lifted your hand from the side of the bed, bringing it close to his lips, placing a soft kiss on the back of your hand. Crowley looked at the paleness in your skin, he could see every vein, reds and blues. He frowned and tightened his grip on your hand, looking up at the heart monitor. The beeps began to happen more often and your hand began to quiver. “Crowley…I….” You trailed off unable to finish your words. “Darling?” He looked back to see your shaking uncontrollably, the monitor going nuts. He fell backwards in shock as a horde of doctors and nurses rushed in. They pulled at the tubing in your body, inserted needles and tried to hold you still. The same nurse as before pulled Crowley off the ground, bringing him to the outside of the room before going back and locking the door behind her. He stood there looking in, watching, waiting. Seconds felt like hours. Minutes felt like days. Crowley, The King of Hell, paralyzed by a woman. “Why wouldn’t you let me save you…” He muttered as the paddles hit your chest.
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| | | Xaria Khaleesi
Posts : 4240 Join date : 2009-11-15 Age : 23 Location : hell
| Subject: Re: writing then and now Wed Nov 09, 2016 7:29 pm | |
| - Caseroos wrote:
- TheRPZ randomly appeared in my Google search tonight and I took a trip down memory lane... seven years ago... It scares me...
- then:
Chieko shook her head. "He is there. Just...." Chieko groaned her eyes went black. "CRAP NO!" She went blind. She couldn't see. "Run! Get out now!" She said as she was forced up.
(Damn I was dramatic AF)
- Now (Thank god):
(Enjoy my deep, Angsty AF Fanfic from my tumblr <3)
The light was really, really bright, but yet you couldn’t stop staring at it. I mean, it was really the only thing you could look at without getting upset. Hearing the heart monitor was bad enough, but having to look at it would have caused some serious outrage. Also, the bratty nurse wouldn’t leave you alone. She said someone had to be in there with you at all times, no exceptions. Which was crap honestly, if you were going to die, it didn’t matter if you had one, two, twenty, or no nurses in there. The doctors could only repair so much, and decided that you didn’t need any serious surgery just yet. The pain in your side was excruciating, no matter how much morphine they pumped you with. Three deep gashes, five broken ribs, cracked shoulder blade, a nasty concussion, broken femur, you name it. That demon did a number on you. All you tried to do was stop a young girl from making a horrible decision. Normally, you would have let things like this go, but your rage was too much, your anger towards the King of Hell just made you want to hurt him, but not directly. Hurting his “sales” wouldn’t maim him that much, but it sure would have made you feel a lot better. Karma’s a bitch. You tilted your head to the side towards the lamp in the corner of the room, watching the little glare in your vision as you went. As you watched the white spot, you noticed a familiar figure standing in the doorway of your hospital room. “Excuse me, who are you? No one else is allowed to be in here,” the nurse came to her feet. Crowley glared at her, his eyes flicking red, she gasped and sprinted out of the room as fast as she could. You rolled your eyes seeing the demon approach your bedside. Angry that he is once again trying to coming to your aid, when you didn’t need help at all. You were perfectly capable on your own. You felt his hand brush over your face ever so softly, twisting a lock of hair around his finger. “I’m sorry, (Y/n)… I’m so very sorry… I never meant for this. I never meant for any of this,” Crowley kept his hand against your cheek, but you stayed silent, not having the courage to speak to him. You could feel your heart begin to race, unsure if it was because of him, or because of the pain in your side becoming worse. He could feel your uneasiness, and slowly peeled back the sheets, revealing your blood soaked bandages. His gasp was audible, clearly painful. Crowley closed his eyes and slowly sunk down to his knees so his head was level with yours. You turned slowly, seeing something that you never thought you would see. The King of Hell was crying, because of you. A small whimper escaped your lips as you looked into his eyes. He looked back at you, wanting to say everything that was on his mind. Wanting to tell you how much he loved you, how much he cared about you, how much he couldn’t live without you. You didn’t need him to tell you that though, because you could see it in those eyes of his. Your heart was beating out of your chest, you could feel the sweat beading on your forehead, but you didn’t mind, you didn’t care. Every feeling of anger in your body faded away and you just felt… blissful almost. Crowley was by your side, and he was going to be no matter what. He lifted your hand from the side of the bed, bringing it close to his lips, placing a soft kiss on the back of your hand. Crowley looked at the paleness in your skin, he could see every vein, reds and blues. He frowned and tightened his grip on your hand, looking up at the heart monitor. The beeps began to happen more often and your hand began to quiver. “Crowley…I….” You trailed off unable to finish your words. “Darling?” He looked back to see your shaking uncontrollably, the monitor going nuts. He fell backwards in shock as a horde of doctors and nurses rushed in. They pulled at the tubing in your body, inserted needles and tried to hold you still. The same nurse as before pulled Crowley off the ground, bringing him to the outside of the room before going back and locking the door behind her. He stood there looking in, watching, waiting. Seconds felt like hours. Minutes felt like days. Crowley, The King of Hell, paralyzed by a woman. “Why wouldn’t you let me save you…” He muttered as the paddles hit your chest.
I relate. And I'll put in a spoiler a more recent example of my writing RP wise now that it's 2016. - Spoiler:
He shrugged. "Being fashionably late is just my forte. Punctuality is sorta usually your forte in terms of being on time." Cernunnos felt as though the other would understand his chronic tardiness if she was in his shoes. "Have you ever ended up finding yourself fashionably late whether on purpose or not before?" he asked out of curiosity. To him, that'd be his excuse whenever he was tardy to some place whether it was class or dinner. He really had no clue how pregnancy hormones really worked, so he just gave an awkward smile back.
Cernunnos still wondered what was going on in his drunken mind for this to happen. He was perfectly aware of hooking up with a jock much earlier on before he got himself into this mess. Besides, with the first hookup, he was still rather sober. He was still in his right mind. Damn his high alcohol tolerance. Cernunnos couldn't help but wonder how much he had drunk at that time to be intimate with a girl. "Let's blame it on the alcohol. Like the song. There, it's the alcohol's fault." Was that suggestion going to help? That was something he didn't know. For that comment, he felt as though it was the thought that counted. What the fuck was he going to do once the child comes? So much could change in less than a year. Cernunnos felt as though he couldn't deny it no matter how much he tried. To him, denying it just won't help much in the long run.
Cernunnos began to twirl his hair. "Are you sure..? They once questioned how my father raised me. There's many things they don't know. There is a thing that is probably necessary for you to know considering the situation we're in..." Was admitting the reason why he disappeared for months at a time to her really the best thing to do? He began to feel quite nervous with a small bit of sweat suddenly building up on his head. Goddammit. He managed to get himself stuck in this predicament of telling the other exactly what he is. Cernunnos let out a small sigh and looked at Caroline nervously unsure of what she'd think. "I'm a wizard."
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